archived-videos Mockumentary Teaser - I really need feedback

[joakimKDM]

Hi there,

I just released the teaser for my independent project, World Wide Vlad. What i've focused on is to not give away the main plot and character, only glimpses. But to keep the audience tempted to figure out what this is all about.

Check it out here:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jHH0vrPJxN4

This is my second mocumentary and I feel I handled the subject and material of the teaser better than my first one, STUART. A NON SMILER.
(Stuart. Teaser #1: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Krv9EzfR-Mg
Stuart. Teaser #2: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fzKqaXlljyk )

I really need some feedback so I'd really appreciate it if you would take litterally 1 minute of your time to watch it

- Joakim
www.kdmentertainment.com

 

[Stewy]

I like it!

 

[rayw]

What i've focused on is to not give away the main plot and character, only glimpses. But to keep the audience tempted to figure out what this is all about.

I really need some feedback so I'd really appreciate it if you would take litterally 1 minute of your time to watch it

I watched it twice - so that's two minutes.

IMHO, the trailer doesn't give away enough plot or character info to generate interest in watching the film.
As is, I don't care what the film is about.

Crazy guy with paint buckets on a hill!
Ooo-ah!
Whatever...

 

[joakimKDM]

I like it!

Thanks

I watched it twice - so that's two minutes.

IMHO, the trailer doesn't give away enough plot or character info to generate interest in watching the film.
As is, I don't care what the film is about.

Crazy guy with paint buckets on a hill!
Ooo-ah!
Whatever...

Haha the paint bucket thing is a stereotypical view of a eastern european person (hence, lots of them come to Norway to paint). It doesnt have anything to do with the story. But thanks for the feedback.

- Joakim