watch Mistakes! My First Film Entry.

[cbrow135]

Hey guys I recently made a film for a contest, the movie had to be about reconciliation and i wanted some feedback. I know that not everyone here is catholic, sorry if you don't like it because of that. Im just looking for advice on editing and what different shots I could have used or some interesting effects that would help me out next time. sorry if its a bit amateurish its my first serious project.
Thanks a lot

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HXDafgWxP78&p=962BD67D89F2088D

 

[TheOpusFuller]

It's actually not that bad. The pacing wasn't bad either. I think it worked for what it was! Keep at it and keep up the good work.

 

[wheatgrinder]

It was effective and conveyed the message well. Effects would cheapen it, as is, the text inserts seem too slick for the rest of the production.

 

[Mikesmovieloft]

Good Job, I'm Catholic as well. The only thing I would change is the text inserts like the person above mentioned..maybe something that fades in and out slowly, but doesn't fly onto the screen..maybe not so crisp either, but semi-transparent or something...I loved the line "do it yourself, I'm playing Call of Duty"...awesome! lol

 

[cbrow135]

Im glad that you liked it, and how was the music. I tried to make it sound more intense in the first half and then I had the angelic music to contrast it.