This is one of my first short scripts so I'm still trying to get the hang of it. It's only 11 pages of reading. It's a sci-fi. In my opinion it feels like a story a bit to big to be compressed into a short but thats just my opinion. Feedbacks and suggestions would be appreciated. I feel like writing possibly a feature length soon so I just wanted to get some good feedback before starting.
http://docs.google.com/fileview?id=...GItNmIxNy00NjMwLTg0YjUtZWJmMTVjODcwOWVj&hl=en
http://docs.google.com/fileview?id=...GItNmIxNy00NjMwLTg0YjUtZWJmMTVjODcwOWVj&hl=en
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