Directorix, thanks for the feedback, i appreciate your time. Your the first guy who told me it was too boring to read. Oh, well, that's the way it goes sometimes.
My plans are too make it a film so I put minimal scences to make the filming inexpensive.
This is my first completed script i registered, i know we could always improve but when i saw some of the films out there, i said hey i could do this too.
I have to disagree with you in this, you don't need a dose of religion to get it. I believe a good story is universal, regardless what the subject is about.
I'm trying to take the readers/audience to the world of these characters, one in which many are not familiar with and have no idea what is happening around them. Usually, when i tell someone it's true they say it's crazy, but life is crazy.