ok heres my opinion, im not right and im not wrong, its again merely my opinion and i care not for what anyone says about it.
This was 1 minute of prolonged pointlessness.
the beginning was some weird thing going on going all wobbly or whatever, the story was not really a story.. the build up was lethargic.
i think you must ask yourself, is this worth watching, is it interesting, is it appealing, is it something i can build a fanbase from, if your answer is yes to this footage then bang your head against that incoming car..
however thats not to say this couldnt be interesting, i see this taking the comedy approach, so what could you do next time? not make it as long for nothing.
make it funny or something.
actually give it a worthy story everything must have a story this to me was just a one liner man walks to mailbox and gets run over.
dont make it predictable.
feel me homey
