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archived-videos Low - A Twilight Zonesque Short

Not bad. Some continuity issues (he's supposed to be in the sub-sub-sub basement, but is really on level 2, a sign that comes and goes). Mainly, it was hard to understand why this encounter would have the effect on him that it does. But, well-shot and the sound effects are creepy as hell.
 
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