LOOKING FOR SOMEONE TO READ OVER MY SCREEN PLAY

[SharieffSalaam]

I was wondering if anyone would be intrested in reading my screen play and maybe giving me some feed back. It feels like it's missing something and it would help me out a great deal if I can get some input. If your intrested please email me blackmodelboy@Yahoo.com and I'll send you the script thank u

 

[indietalk]

Moved to Screenwriting for feedback.