archived-videos Looking for feedback

Hello everybody I am looking to share my videos I learn and get feedback. I am looking for suggestions of what worked, what didn't and of course suggestions on all things film making and any exercises that you know are good to try. Please Keep in mind I am as new, as a newborn baby to life at film making. The video links are below. I hope to post new videos semi-frequent as I try new things out and learn, so please check back every now and then, to provide more feedback on this journey.

Thank You
Samuel

Videos are in order of my creation of them:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LmYuP9niTIM

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YCI1-407tKM

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d-yX4kbfve0

https://youtu.be/u18EsUEQhHY
 
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Hi. Rule: cut in motion. So how do you cut the fridge door better?

The second film I can't see - music violation.
 
As I suggested last time, you go first. How do you feel you went? What can you do better? How?
I can't really say how I think it felt, because I think everything I do is pretty awful. On the otherside of things I like my last short video I made, which is the 3rd video on the list it just felt more me I guess and the flow felt nice.
 
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