archived-videos Looking for Feedback on My New Short Comedy Sketch

[Cstein15]

Hey Guys,

I'm back, after a couple months, I've teamed up with a friend, and we've started making some short comedic sketches. We just realeased the first one, and are looking for all the support, and feedback possible. The group name is Mad Cabbage, and our first sketch is below. Please check it out, and give us any and all feedback, everything helps us improve as creators. If you like what you see, help us out, and drop a like or subscribe.

https://youtu.be/jp7B3bY9kOU

Thanks,
Cameron

 

[buscando]

Love it, looking forward to more. (said in a whisper)

 

[Cstein15]

Thanks so much, we're looking forward to making more.

 

[indietalk]

I thought the delivery was good, and the comedic timing was good, the material was not the best, but this being #1, keep at it. You've got something going here.

 

[Cstein15]

Thanks so much for the feedback , and encouragement.

 

[Filman]

"Okay, it's my room mate's diary" is my favorite. Would be funny with the original sounds, too.

 

[Quality]

The whisper element was what sold this for me. Good job.

 

[Cstein15]

Thanks so much, glad ya liked it.

 

[XippyXippo]

EAT THE HAIR NEXT TIME!

 

[Cstein15]

Lol, there's an outtake where we did that, just decided not to include it.