Hi,
Im having trouble creating the logline for my short film that I'm about to send to festivals.
(I know, I know, I was supposed to have one already) and I have a couple but find it impossible to choose or judge their quality.
I'll post 2 here, any comments/ feedback/ help would be more then welcome!
- Struggling with a fatal illness a young man with Down syndrome has one last wish: To marry the love of his life.
- A determined man with down syndrome wont let his fatal heart condition nor society’s judgment get in the way of marrying his high school sweetheart.
(I find it hard to implement both the resistance of church to marry them and the fact that he does not have very much longer to live)
Thank you so much in advance!
Im having trouble creating the logline for my short film that I'm about to send to festivals.
(I know, I know, I was supposed to have one already) and I have a couple but find it impossible to choose or judge their quality.
I'll post 2 here, any comments/ feedback/ help would be more then welcome!
- Struggling with a fatal illness a young man with Down syndrome has one last wish: To marry the love of his life.
- A determined man with down syndrome wont let his fatal heart condition nor society’s judgment get in the way of marrying his high school sweetheart.
(I find it hard to implement both the resistance of church to marry them and the fact that he does not have very much longer to live)
Thank you so much in advance!