archived-videos Legacy - Action Short Film - Chicago 48 Hour Film Festival Entry

nice sound in intro... good bass...

perhaps a bit more back lighting in the start...

good business woman... but the end shot of her, makes her seem a heck of alot more worried than in the start..

shot of the knife in the tree first time... it seemed like you panned too far... like the second one better... i mean it goes against how it's normally done in the first one.. wastes the rest of the screen.

good music for the fight scene... you need to be a bit heavier on the combat... it just looks too much like stage fighting. Perhaps faster cuts, let us see less from other angles.

picture quality is nice...using zoom lenses i see, so only small portions are in focus... nice...

the knifing sound is just wrong sounding...

wayy too dark in the death shot...

a few out of focus moments on the asian lady in red.... make that more than a few


overall, quite good.. got potential for your future... :D


edit : just saw the after shots, quite fun...good include... :D
 
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