archived-videos "Knife" - A 16mm Short Film

[HalfNakedRodeo]

This was my final for Intro to Cinematography last semester. I'd love to know what you think!

As a side note, I am aware of the underexposure in a lot of shots. As a product of the digital age I'm still pretty challenged without a viewfinder.

What I'd really like to know is how well it keeps your attention, and how easily you're able to follow the story.

Thanks for watching!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YUNXbpVK8g0&feature=g-u-u

 

[Cineman513]

I like the short a lot. I feel like if the acting wasn't as over dramatic at times, the movie would be taken as serious as the story though.