lway too long. This should have moved very fast, too much time between the setup and the punch line
Your AE SFX are bloody awesome!
I'm agreeing with Wheat the story is tepid, but I promise I recognize all the planning and prep work that went into the principle photography + the ridiculous amount of time you must've put into post work.
Branch beyond muzzle flashes and (lame-O) blood clouds and pretty soon you'll have a very nice demo reel for your SFX Post Production business.
Should consider working on a rate sheet.
Can you give us some principle photography tech specs?
Resolution, frames per second, aperture settings, etc. ?
Did you shoot this specifically to go on YT or do you consider other formats as well?
To me the slow dolly-in shot on the "minaret" (making good use of that abandoned airfield, eh! Kudos!) was by far the coolest shot included.
Did you use your gift slider for that or other device?
TIA!
me thinks so too
Also, If I have to watch boys shooting at each other for so long, at least I wanna know WHY they do it.
love the bunny...
It was way over the top.. unrealistic as heck but fun anyway. Your AE kunkfu is strong.
way too long. This should have moved very fast, too much time between the setup and the punch line if you know what I mean.. its like a moderately funny joke, told badly. A REALLY funny joke can survive a less then stellar telling, but a less then great joke requires good timing.
EDIT:
I hope your locking your edit before you start on the AE, you dont want to waste one second of post effort on shots that get cut.
hahaha i loved it. Is it hard to produce such effects in AE? Also can this be done in FinalCut? Probably not but im just curious