It wasn't bad, it just wasn't up my alley. I think maybe there could have been a little more with the note. Maybe a reading.. or less talking of what you were thinking. I"ve been listening to a lot of Doctor Who radio dramas lately, and it works for that medium, but I feel you should have let your hands do the talking with handling the note... let the conflict show there. Does that make sense to anyone? Don't let that discourage you though... I did get the vibe that this was somewhat personal, and your heart for the project showed through, which I think is important. I loved the music at the beginning. I thought it was just some cool atmospheric (i'm big on atmosphere) sounds. If it was something you wrote, or friends you had do it for you, I suggest you keep working with them. Kinda takes me back to the moody tunes from the Silent Hill video game series, which i loved!