archived-videos JJJ - A Short Film

[trappped]

I suppose this is an extreme form of "stream-of-consciousness" film making.

I was wondering what you all thought of the acting, the acts committed, and the way those two were captured, here in the short film.

Heavy criticism is wanted.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P6KDQnA-UCU

 

[Jamster]

Ok so the video/audio was poor.

The first bit seemed like his 'outer' self came to visit him and listen to him vent/release pressure...

The car journey and f'in the can - I have absolutely no idea, sorry.


JJJ it obviously means something to you but it's when it means something and engages others art takes place inspires... otherwise as previously stated its just masturbation.

I normally wouldn't be so blunt but you did ask for 'heavy criticism' - all the best, Jim.

 

[johnnyuk2011]

Didn't really get your film at all sorry...

The camera work was awful, was that suppose to be a POV? The sound was a bit poor as well, I couldn't understand what the guy in the sandals was saying.

The shot from the car did little to assist the narrative (if there was a narrative in the first place?)

When the guy was humping the soda can, I thought "Harmony Korine ripoff."

Re-make it, rip it apart and start again.... And buy a tripod

 

[rayw]

Um... no comment.

(Obviously this is waaaay over my primitive bug brain.)