archived-videos It's Not Funny - PSA

[sleightlyprismatic]

Hey guys, I just wanted to get some feedback on this short I made for a "don't text and drive" campaign.

http://youtu.be/dK-MmuJYV-U

I think the idea was really good, but for some reason the pacing didn't exactly convey the level of humor I was looking for. Any comments about that?

Thanks!
Luke

 

[Wolverine237]

I liked it. Very simple, to the point, and the perfect amount of humor. Good job on this.

 

[sleightlyprismatic]

I liked it. Very simple, to the point, and the perfect amount of humor. Good job on this.

Thanks! Anything you'd have done differently? I feel like the humor almost feel flat at some points

 

[navmachine]

I liked the footage a lot. The humor was good, too. Nice pacing with the cuts. I would cut the kitchen scene as the fire was a little fake looking and wasn't as high of stakes as people dying or getting their car stolen.

 

[Murdock]

I wouldn't think you would want to be funny. That being the case, I would have had some kids die in a car accident or something like that.

This video, I couldn't take seriously as a campaign.