So like every good writer, I'm trying to hook the audience into wanting to watch a 20-30 minute short from a production company that no one has ever heard of.
As a reader, would you want to see more or move on with your life?
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FADE IN:
(1) INT/EXT. CAR AT A MOUTAIN OVERLOOK – NIGHT
(A) You see a couple making love in the bed of a truck outside. There appears to be some bright light illuminating the entire scene.
MARISSA (V.O)
All we have to do…
(B) L-SHOT TRANSITION TO, the two sitting by a cliff at dusk. She looks at him while talking.
MARISSA
…Is wake up.
SMASH CUT TO:
(2) INT. SORIN’S BEDROOM (EMPTY TOWN) – EARLY MORNING
(A) You see SORIN spring out of bed. He pants heavily as he scans the room, trying to remember where he was.
(B) The place is lofty with a cold tone to it.
(C) The YOUNG man slowly calms down and stares off in a slight daze.
SORIN (V.O)
I keep seeing her every night, but I never even met her…Is that what a woman looks like?
(D) Sorin looks out of the window next to him and sees an empty grey street.
SORIN (V.O)
I wonder if I knew her. Maybe she was real.
(E) He moves his feet to the floor and sits at the edge of the bed, looking off as he dwells on the dream.
SORIN (V.O)
All we have to do is wake up. Huh…Wake up.
(2) CUT TO BLACK
ROLL CREDITS (QUE MUSIC)
MONTAGE:
(A) You see Sorin walking to the bathroom.
(B) Sorin brushes his teeth. The facet is on. He spits out the toothpaste and gurgles some water. After rinsing his mouth, the young man looks up and stares at his reflection.
(C) Sorin peers intently at the mirror, as though he is in deep thought.
[CREDITS]
(D) You see Sorin running in the middle of a neighborhood street. He is wearing a scruffy hat and a worn out jacket. It is a cold morning in an empty town. The sun hasn’t even risen.
(E) Sorin passes by a row of empty houses as he turns a corner.
[Credits]
(F) Sorin runs by an empty ally way.
(G) You can see streetlights going from GREEN to RED on a road that’s empty.
[Credits]
(H) Sorin runs past a corner store that’s empty. Every other store is just the same.
SORIN (V.O)
What are all these buildings for?
(I) You can see a line of cars sitting along the street.
SORIN (V.O)
…These sitting cars that never seem to rot away?
(J) You can see Sorin running up the middle of a MAIN street. Behind him is a small town that’s desolate.
[Credits]
(K) You see Sorin run along the side of a highway that leads out of town. He stops and bends over to catch his breath.
(L) He finally moves back up, putting his hands on the back of his head as he continues to pant. Sorin stares straight and then turns to look at the city.
(H) You see a beautiful town resting along a hillside.
(I) You see a close up on his eyes.
SORIN (V.O)
Why am I the only one?
(J) WIDE SHOT on rising sun and Sorin looking off.
SORIN (V.O)
What else is out there?
[SHOW TITLE OF MOVIE: NOVEK]
As a reader, would you want to see more or move on with your life?
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FADE IN:
(1) INT/EXT. CAR AT A MOUTAIN OVERLOOK – NIGHT
(A) You see a couple making love in the bed of a truck outside. There appears to be some bright light illuminating the entire scene.
MARISSA (V.O)
All we have to do…
(B) L-SHOT TRANSITION TO, the two sitting by a cliff at dusk. She looks at him while talking.
MARISSA
…Is wake up.
SMASH CUT TO:
(2) INT. SORIN’S BEDROOM (EMPTY TOWN) – EARLY MORNING
(A) You see SORIN spring out of bed. He pants heavily as he scans the room, trying to remember where he was.
(B) The place is lofty with a cold tone to it.
(C) The YOUNG man slowly calms down and stares off in a slight daze.
SORIN (V.O)
I keep seeing her every night, but I never even met her…Is that what a woman looks like?
(D) Sorin looks out of the window next to him and sees an empty grey street.
SORIN (V.O)
I wonder if I knew her. Maybe she was real.
(E) He moves his feet to the floor and sits at the edge of the bed, looking off as he dwells on the dream.
SORIN (V.O)
All we have to do is wake up. Huh…Wake up.
(2) CUT TO BLACK
ROLL CREDITS (QUE MUSIC)
MONTAGE:
(A) You see Sorin walking to the bathroom.
(B) Sorin brushes his teeth. The facet is on. He spits out the toothpaste and gurgles some water. After rinsing his mouth, the young man looks up and stares at his reflection.
(C) Sorin peers intently at the mirror, as though he is in deep thought.
[CREDITS]
(D) You see Sorin running in the middle of a neighborhood street. He is wearing a scruffy hat and a worn out jacket. It is a cold morning in an empty town. The sun hasn’t even risen.
(E) Sorin passes by a row of empty houses as he turns a corner.
[Credits]
(F) Sorin runs by an empty ally way.
(G) You can see streetlights going from GREEN to RED on a road that’s empty.
[Credits]
(H) Sorin runs past a corner store that’s empty. Every other store is just the same.
SORIN (V.O)
What are all these buildings for?
(I) You can see a line of cars sitting along the street.
SORIN (V.O)
…These sitting cars that never seem to rot away?
(J) You can see Sorin running up the middle of a MAIN street. Behind him is a small town that’s desolate.
[Credits]
(K) You see Sorin run along the side of a highway that leads out of town. He stops and bends over to catch his breath.
(L) He finally moves back up, putting his hands on the back of his head as he continues to pant. Sorin stares straight and then turns to look at the city.
(H) You see a beautiful town resting along a hillside.
(I) You see a close up on his eyes.
SORIN (V.O)
Why am I the only one?
(J) WIDE SHOT on rising sun and Sorin looking off.
SORIN (V.O)
What else is out there?
[SHOW TITLE OF MOVIE: NOVEK]
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