EDIT: I'm saying all this as someone who regularly contributes to campaigns on IndieGoGo and Kickstarter. If the pitch is strong and I believe in the project, I will donate.
Your campaign is absolutely absurd and I'm not saying that because you're young, I'm saying it because your plan is total bunkum.
You're looking to raise $40,500 but are going to record sound with the Audio Technica ATR 6550 (which you already have)? That's a $50 microphone.
You've allocated $300 for props and then are planning to purchase (people will really want to pay for that) a Canon 5D Mark II and some lenses. I hear you talk in the video about jibs and dollies but I'm not sure where this figure has come from. Seems to me like it's been plucked from the air.
This isn't to dissuade you but obviously you're young and asking for 40K on IndieGoGo is a massive deal. That's a year's income for people. I'm not sure you've thought to through budgeting of your film at all and I think, given that, that it's not really right to be asking people to donate money.
However I'm sure that you can rethink your strategy and come up with a really good film for nothing like that cost.
