As you asked for feedback...
I think you're incredibly talented and some of your stuff has that little touch of filming 'genius' which means you have a better chance than most of being tremendously successful. However, didn't like this one and turned off after less than 30 seconds as there were too many cliches for me. I thought the touches of discomfort you brought (which are kinda your hallmarks) turned me off when combined with the cliches.
To explain about the 'cliche,' have seen a million vids with NY shots and a too many vids with kids with dead military dads and this looked like another one. My favourite is 'The Zac Brown Band' and their song 'Chicken Fried' but it's a personal thing.
I get that it's part of your style and normally dig your style. I also get that the discomfort you bring is clever but really struggled with this one.
Sorry...

I say 'sorry' because I know how talented you are. Almost as talented as me...