Hi,
I have a scene in my script where a person who cannot speak uses her phone for communication by texting on her phone and then showing the text the person she is communicating to. The other person reads the text and then responds.
My question is what is the best way to tackle this in a screenplay? I have done it like below but I am not sure if there is a much better, simpler way.
Thanks
I have a scene in my script where a person who cannot speak uses her phone for communication by texting on her phone and then showing the text the person she is communicating to. The other person reads the text and then responds.
My question is what is the best way to tackle this in a screenplay? I have done it like below but I am not sure if there is a much better, simpler way.
Code:
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JOSH (V.O.)
Is she ignoring my question?
Alex shows the phone screen to Josh to read her answer.
(text)
Indian.
JOSH
Indian… why did you text your answer on your phone?
Alex texts again and shows her phone screen to Josh.
(text)
How else am I supposed to answer?
JOSH
What do you mean? You can just tell me.
Alex is confused towards Josh. She looks down and covers her face with her hand.
JOSH
What? What’s wrong?
Alex texts…
(text)
Did you read my whole profile on the dating site?
JOSH
Come to think of it… no I didn’t. I just read the first paragraph.
Alex shakes her head as she texts.
(text)
Then you missed the part where I mentioned I’m a mute.
JOSH
Huh? Wait! That means… you can’t speak?
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Thanks