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A while back I posted a thread with a sample of my screenplay writing, to see how others would view it. I wanted to know if they thought it was properly formatted, and didn't mind hearing opinions on it's level of entertainment value --even though I wasn't particularly looking for that. This thread is dedicated to another sample of my screenplay writing, and the writing was inspired by a dream I had not too long ago. Is it formatted correctly? The dream sequence? Look professional? Passable? Decent? Bad?
Did I correctly write the main characters --Johns-- dialogue correctly into the dream sequence it's a part of? It's part of a dream sequence where mostly visuals are shown on screen with no dialogue, so I was unsure as to how to include dialogue -- italicized or not-- when writing it.
A while back I posted a thread with a sample of my screenplay writing, to see how others would view it. I wanted to know if they thought it was properly formatted, and didn't mind hearing opinions on it's level of entertainment value --even though I wasn't particularly looking for that. This thread is dedicated to another sample of my screenplay writing, and the writing was inspired by a dream I had not too long ago. Is it formatted correctly? The dream sequence? Look professional? Passable? Decent? Bad?
Did I correctly write the main characters --Johns-- dialogue correctly into the dream sequence it's a part of? It's part of a dream sequence where mostly visuals are shown on screen with no dialogue, so I was unsure as to how to include dialogue -- italicized or not-- when writing it.