Recently I wrote a sample scene to a test screenplay to test my writing skills/practice my writing.
I want to know how it came out, and when I say that I mean to say that I primarily would like to know if the formatting came out properly. The entertainment value of screenplays differ based on their reader, and the idea of the screenplays themselves. My scene is about a fictitious character named "John Doe", who uses "IndieTalk.com" to hash out answers to a question he has regarding film making.
I used Celtx to assist in formatting it, and uploaded it to a site for you to see it as a PDF document.
Link:
http://docdro.id/qkQvXzn
I noticed a typo by one of the characters names --"User 2"-- and it regards leaving a colon where I forgot to remove it.
If you want to give feedback on my ability to tell a story/paint a picture of what's happening in a screenplay, that's welcomed as well. Primarily my goal was to know if my test scene was formatted correctly, even if the idea behind the scene/within the scene is boring, so-so, great, or bad --not meaning to repeat myself.
I want to know how it came out, and when I say that I mean to say that I primarily would like to know if the formatting came out properly. The entertainment value of screenplays differ based on their reader, and the idea of the screenplays themselves. My scene is about a fictitious character named "John Doe", who uses "IndieTalk.com" to hash out answers to a question he has regarding film making.
I used Celtx to assist in formatting it, and uploaded it to a site for you to see it as a PDF document.
Link:
http://docdro.id/qkQvXzn
I noticed a typo by one of the characters names --"User 2"-- and it regards leaving a colon where I forgot to remove it.
If you want to give feedback on my ability to tell a story/paint a picture of what's happening in a screenplay, that's welcomed as well. Primarily my goal was to know if my test scene was formatted correctly, even if the idea behind the scene/within the scene is boring, so-so, great, or bad --not meaning to repeat myself.