archived-videos Hip-Hop Music Video

[Daniel_S]

Just finished up this music video. Let me know what your thoughts are. Thank you!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=watch?v=skD2bfxlosw

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=skD2bfxlosw

 

[Kevin_ExploringIndieFilms]

It wasn't bad, I've seen a lot worse. Your audio was pretty clear but the shaking was a bit much and distracted me a lot.

I personally really like what Raz Simone is doing with this videos (no I'm not trying to promote him and I have no affiliation with him). https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=VbejePreBAk

Take note of the motions and angles he uses.

Hope this helps, and best of luck!

 

[Daniel_S]

I like that, very smooth. Yeah, this was my first time employing a kind of controlled chaotic shake. Suppose it could have used more control. Thank you for the feedback!

 

[Kevin_ExploringIndieFilms]

Yeah I feel ya man! I get what you were going for: sometimes less is more. Anyways, keep making videos and practicing your skills!

 

[gorillaonabike]

Congrats on completing. That trio can rap and if they discover how to be original, they could make something.

Vid was too shaky - too, too, too shaky. Get what you're trying to do but I felt like that was shot from inside a washing machine during a spin cycle.