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Hello From Guelph

I have a neat idea for an original screenplay. Here's the log line:

A Mexican Migrant, Human Smuggler and Ex Con confront their own desperate plights
by exploiting and betraying each other in a real life game of Rock Paper Scissors.
 
:welcome:
You should post that in the right category for feedback. It's not really a logline with the "rock paper scissors" analogy, that would be more of a tagline. But it's long for a tagline, so there's issues with both.
 
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