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The video looks great. The music is really well done. I liked a lot of the shot choices, some pretty inventive ideas. That being said, it wasn't funny. At all. Obviously a lot of time was spent on this and a lot of talent was shown. Just needs better writing.
The idea doesn't bother me, but the talent sure did. Everyone was making that smirking "Im so funny" face. You see it in a lot of web comedy stuff and it is a personal irk of mine.
On the positive side the music was very well produced.
Ultimately do you find this funny? Who are you trying to target with this?