archived-videos Found footage film (feedback please)

[faabbii]

Hi,

I'm from Holland and I made an found footage film. It's about a guy who´s following someone with his camera.

I could really use some feedback .

This is the link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6VWtXDL8Vk8 . There are also english subtitles.

I also hope you can enjoy the movie .

 

[dlmade]

needs more editing, and needs to be paced, it clearly looks like it is shot on purpose, and the gun scene, you should've made the blood more darker and let it ran down the shirt

 

[faabbii]

Thank you very much for your feedback . Are there specific scenes that need more editing? Like te beginning or the ending? You are right about the gun scene. I'm gonna try something different the next time.