Hey there! I wasn't too sure where the best place was to put this so I kind of figured this one was most appropriate... however if anyone thinks other locations on the forum may be acceptable (or gain more feedback/exposure) that'd be pleasing to hear!
Anyway, this was done for a friend as a competition entry for a fitness store here in Australia (Lorna Jane). it was one of the top selected so she was quite pleased with that ($500 in store reward).
We filmed it in one day, and I edited it in one night about a week later. I'm not completely happy with it... we needed a lot more planning, which was difficult as we were both approaching university exam time the following week. I feel I overdid it a little with the lens burn but I was running short of time to render and get her to upload it.
That said, I'm quite pleased with how it turned out for the time it took and the lack of planning but I'd still love some constructive feedback. My main issue with it overall... too much shaky cam! I was going for that look but I felt I over did it, mainly due to being unable to see the LCD screen in such sunlight.
That's way more writing than I intended, so to cut it short...
Filmed in 1 day, edited in 1 night
Shot on a Pentax K-X with a Tamron 18-200mm lens
Edited in Premiere CS5.5
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fuV7ZTpAdwk
Many thanks!
Anyway, this was done for a friend as a competition entry for a fitness store here in Australia (Lorna Jane). it was one of the top selected so she was quite pleased with that ($500 in store reward).
We filmed it in one day, and I edited it in one night about a week later. I'm not completely happy with it... we needed a lot more planning, which was difficult as we were both approaching university exam time the following week. I feel I overdid it a little with the lens burn but I was running short of time to render and get her to upload it.
That said, I'm quite pleased with how it turned out for the time it took and the lack of planning but I'd still love some constructive feedback. My main issue with it overall... too much shaky cam! I was going for that look but I felt I over did it, mainly due to being unable to see the LCD screen in such sunlight.
That's way more writing than I intended, so to cut it short...
Filmed in 1 day, edited in 1 night
Shot on a Pentax K-X with a Tamron 18-200mm lens
Edited in Premiere CS5.5
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fuV7ZTpAdwk
Many thanks!
