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Into hearing any feedback. Basic premise: Husband wants something, wife won't give it, Husband angry, wife about to give in, husband blows it, wife doesn't
8 pages (5 minute short for class). check it out please. open to all comments! be honest. WGAw registered so read it please. Shooting in 3 weeks. Want to tighten it asap. Any help/ideas ?
I originally, didn't show what the man wrote, people asked what was on the note, i caved in and popped in a stupid gag, i think i should have left it unknown, ala tarantinos briefcase you know? what do you people think?
Into hearing any feedback. Basic premise: Husband wants something, wife won't give it, Husband angry, wife about to give in, husband blows it, wife doesn't
8 pages (5 minute short for class). check it out please. open to all comments! be honest. WGAw registered so read it please. Shooting in 3 weeks. Want to tighten it asap. Any help/ideas ?
I originally, didn't show what the man wrote, people asked what was on the note, i caved in and popped in a stupid gag, i think i should have left it unknown, ala tarantinos briefcase you know? what do you people think?
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