archived-videos first short film drama Father Time

[dlmade]

Hey guys, this is my first true try at making an in depth drama. I tried to get real emotions and capture a really dark feeling. But unfortunately my editor and cinematographer were like me very in-experienced.
But still please have a look and let me know what you all think of it.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UWxAypfZhjs

Let me know what you guys think.

Thank you in advance

 

[buscando]

This might need some audio work.
What's being said at :20 when the heart rate graphic is on?
I turned up the sound but still can't figure it out.
Then at 1:10 when he says "Exactly" real loud it jolted my ears
cuz my sound was still turned up.