I'm a new user and I was referred by a teacher that some can help and give respectable feedback. This was a creation that was created from start to end in less then five weeks. Thanks for the help if given.
All these have very similar stories: Kids losing track of reality with crazy imaginations... which is basically what filmmaking is. Basically here is what I think you should stop doing, start doing, and continue doing:
Stop: Having the effects out weigh the filmmaking. This has held back many of my friends. Lightsabers are awesome, but great audio and visual quality carry more weight.
Start: Doing many more projects. If you loved making this, it will only get better. And it takes time to become really good.
Continue: Making funny, human stories that make sense. Story is number 1. It was very ridiculous and very funny. Especially when the guy steals the drink.
