First proper short film- cold war

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cookwerth said:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tZwxlYCPMmI

check it out and let me know what you think, took around 4 weeks, the first all out film I've gone for really.
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Well done on having shot and edited a short. Camerawork is good, editing is slick, colouring is nice, effects are good. I was admiring some of the elements and learning from them.

Bad parts are: 1.10 - 2.10 killed it for me. 1 minute of words on a screen was way too much for me. Also, the actors were unrealistic. I was immediately pulled out of my sense of disbelief when the first actor started to talk as he was unconvincing. They need to be significantly stronger.
 
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Congrats, this film worked for me, especially regarding cinematography, editing. Could have more speed in the action scenes. For your next film try experienced actors. With this film on your demo reel, Im sure you will find
actors willing to work for free/food.
 
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