I would like some feedback on my short script. I posted it on celtx forum and got some feedback, but more feedback never hurts, as long if it's constructive criticism. So I'm gonna link from there(just click on the link in the first post to see the script)
http://forums.celtx.com/viewtopic.php?t=9800
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This is a short drama about an an emo who hits the bottom. It will make you think about the randomness of life, just like a coin toss on Super Bowl game. Is his life a faux pas or not? Mon Dieu! Morte la bête, mort le venin... Unbelievable!
http://forums.celtx.com/viewtopic.php?t=9800
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This is a short drama about an an emo who hits the bottom. It will make you think about the randomness of life, just like a coin toss on Super Bowl game. Is his life a faux pas or not? Mon Dieu! Morte la bête, mort le venin... Unbelievable!