I'm really happy with this. The idea came to me while listening to George Jones and four hours later this is what I have. The format got a little skewed in google docs, and I'm not a subject matter expert anyway (why I'm here).
Some things I intentionally left out, character and location descriptions for example, only because I am filming this and I know who will play which parts and where we will film.
The names are actually the names of people I intend to use as actors, and not the names of characters. I always have the hardest time naming people (my wife named our daughter) so suggestions are more than welcome here.
Mainly let me know what you think about the story, the dialogue, and just overall writing ability. Anything you feel may improve my writing ability please chime in I just don't want to get completely lost in formatting.
Thanks in advance!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JwWdD_I4fnytTl35mUa9mEAuM7nu0USiCg5A6o4OA3A/edit?hl=en_US
Some things I intentionally left out, character and location descriptions for example, only because I am filming this and I know who will play which parts and where we will film.
The names are actually the names of people I intend to use as actors, and not the names of characters. I always have the hardest time naming people (my wife named our daughter) so suggestions are more than welcome here.
Mainly let me know what you think about the story, the dialogue, and just overall writing ability. Anything you feel may improve my writing ability please chime in I just don't want to get completely lost in formatting.
Thanks in advance!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JwWdD_I4fnytTl35mUa9mEAuM7nu0USiCg5A6o4OA3A/edit?hl=en_US
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