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Feedback Request - To Be Remembered (Short drama, 8 pages)

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stevencwood

This was written from a writing prompt where the story had to be based around a phobia, and no more than 12 pages, so I chose Athazagoraphobia, or the fear of being forgotten.

I didn't get too heavy handed with the concept, but I wanted to get some opinions whether or not I rushed the plot.

Logline - A caring detective does his part to ensure murder victims are remembered within the community.

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B_vHHlz3zmHYdnpEV3ZqdndFN2s
 
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