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tv-writing Feedback Request - Joe Fo Sho - sitcom pilot

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The conversation Joe has with his grandma in the opening scene got me hooked to read through the script. Real funny stuff. It reminded me of a friend from the ghetto who would choke up on complicated words: predictement.

The script reads real good. Interesting choice of short scenes and gags, with a nice punchline at the end. Two thumbs up!
 
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