Hello everyone,
I am looking for feedback on my first script, which I hope to make into my first short film. I have been rewriting it for the last week, and I think I have gassed myself out. I want some fresh eyes on the project and hopefully some insight that I may be missing. Anything helps.
The script is 27 pages long.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/18ng5Z7WT0NFM02yVfixVY8JAlRQE6d0Qk-l5C83sX7M/edit
Thanks.
I am looking for feedback on my first script, which I hope to make into my first short film. I have been rewriting it for the last week, and I think I have gassed myself out. I want some fresh eyes on the project and hopefully some insight that I may be missing. Anything helps.
The script is 27 pages long.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/18ng5Z7WT0NFM02yVfixVY8JAlRQE6d0Qk-l5C83sX7M/edit
Thanks.