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archived-videos Feedback on dancing short film for Cinematography

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hseppa

Hello All,

We were instructed to create a 40-60 second short for our Cinematography class.

I would love any and all feedback on how to improve it. I have been playing around with slow motion on the canon 7D and ran into the issue of flickering lights on this one which leaves a ghost effect. It was a great learn project!

https://vimeo.com/78227656

Thanks so much!
 
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Occasionally the cuts are too fast, and there is some noise. But it looks good overall.

Was there motivation behind the costumes, shots, and location in the film?
 
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