watch Feedback on dancing short film for Cinematography

[hseppa]

Hello All,

We were instructed to create a 40-60 second short for our Cinematography class.

I would love any and all feedback on how to improve it. I have been playing around with slow motion on the canon 7D and ran into the issue of flickering lights on this one which leaves a ghost effect. It was a great learn project!

https://vimeo.com/78227656

Thanks so much!

 

[Trackrabbit21]

How'd you go about doing your slow motion? Reducing the duration or going from 60 frames to 24? (not sure if the 7D shoots in 60fps)

 

[ChimpPhobiaFilms]

Occasionally the cuts are too fast, and there is some noise. But it looks good overall.

Was there motivation behind the costumes, shots, and location in the film?