archived-videos Feedback Needed. Terror in Mexico City.

[DaveO]

Hi everyone I'm making a Teaser for an Indie Movie And would like some feedback from you guys.

Please tell me if it looks good, crappy, etc.

http://youtube.com/watch?v=SpqCaUkm2Uw

If you could tell me what can be improved it would be very good.

Dave

 

[mack23]

Good work

I like the flow of the pice it was smooth

 

[FatalFire]

Its kinda cool.

Its some kind of cloverfield type film?

If it is maybe it would have been better to see one of the jets thrown into the building instead of a helicopter.