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Feature length comedy, "Abe Makes A Movie"

Hey indietalkers!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V1dJSCR_yuQ

We are excited about the new feature length comedy we are going to shoot this fall called Abe Makes A Movie. This is our first run at a crowdfunding campaign, which watching the forums for a while I've seen a lot of you do and succeed at. Any advice you all have or any critiques on the video would be greatly appreciated.

http://igg.me/at/abemakesamovie/x/4351942

Here is a little about the story:
"Abe Makes A Movie" is the story about a recently dumped, underachieving want-to-be filmmaker who assembles a ragtag crew of offbeat characters to make a movie for a local film festival in an effort to win back his ex girlfriend. It's a tale of setting off down a path of "what you think you want" and how it can sometimes show you, through a comedy of errors, what you need.

Thank you all for checking it out and any advice in advance!
Ryan
 
It was good, but there was one thing that bothered me.

Some of the jokes were hits, others ... misses. It felt like you were trying too hard to be funny.

Anyway, good luck! :cool:
 
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