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I would say the music is too loud it is hard to hear the voices. The text seems to take way too long to animate. The text in general is way too big.

I thought you did a decent job of framing your shots. The footage seems under exposed probably do to no 3 point lighting.

The whole thing has this funny fuzzy look to it like it is a dream state or something. Not sure if that is what you were going for.
 
Hey,

Thank you for your comments? You think The music is loud? hmm I have to do doublecheck that. It was definitely shot a certain kind of way to get that "dreamy" feeling...
 
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