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watch Dreaming of Space short film

I just finished Dreaming of Space, a short adventure into science fiction and fun effects.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gb-Ad-TvFUI

What do you think?
 
Congrats on producing a piece of weird but strangely compelling film making. Watched it all the way through, wanted to know what was going to happen. Well done.

Negatives: Everything you know about and probably I wouldn't be able to add much. Am sure you know what needs to be improved. As an idea, some of the shots were too grainy, adding was a little odd in places, needed more emotion, floaty stuff was good but could've been better. However, overall was strong.
 
Thanks! Yeah, lots of grain. If we had a second day of shooting I would've changed some of the floating and gotten more coverage of the middle segment.
 
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