Draft for pilot episode for a web series.

[Cpkeyes]

https://dochub.com/cpkeyesortiz/jp28bn/mongrelscriptdraft2?pg=3

This is the draft for a pilot to a web series I wish to make, I would like thoughts, concerns and such. I hope to get some more thoughts before I make the final edits.

*If you can't see it, my apologizes, I'm not used to PDFs.

 

[maz]

Nothing there. Made me create an account, but nothing there at all, unfortunately. What's wrong with Google Docs or Dropbox?

 

[Cpkeyes]

I couldn't figure out to make the PDF visible to others.

 

[Cpkeyes]

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B1n4tPTPAuc3dEV5VV9yb3JacW8/view

This fine?

 

[maz]

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B1n4tPTPAuc3dEV5VV9yb3JacW8/view

This fine?

Again, if you want people to take the time out to read it, you should make it easy for people to access - the file requires me to request permission to access it. You need to change the file permissions on Google drive.

 

[Cpkeyes]

I know that, I'm just not used to this.

I changed it to anyway with the link can view it.