As various people have mentioned (for this film, and the others you have made)... there is a lot to be cut.
Still, this is one one of the funniest series I have seen in a long time.
I'm not so keen on the message that you try to send in several of them (including the other non-published ones on your website), but they are entertaining nonetheless.
I'm assuming there is some personal reason for doing so, but I would not dare to dig so privately.
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The biggest issue here is...
...music.
Your crew is very capable of creating fine films.
Don't hobble yourselves by using non-licenced music. This applies to almost all of your films.
Try and find a regional musician to score the films. Failing that, use music that is in Public Domain. There are even musicians on this forum that are looking to score films for no cost.
Many of your films have potential to go places... I'd hate to see them struck down, due to music licences.
