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archived-videos Digital Short - Bread and Butter

very touching and very funny. Looks like you did a lot of hand-held on this one, think some shots would have looked nicer if it were on a tripod. Other than that, great job, had me laughing and intrigued!
 
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This is one of few times where the quality of the story/tone was much better then the actual techinal aspects of the film (Cinematography, lighting, practical effects, editing, etc).
 
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