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Really nice work on this one. Liked the slow, contemplative camera work. Music sounded great as well; worked well with the imagery. I liked how you didn't show the characters faces at first (specially the shot of the woman peeking over the covers in the morning). Personally I think you should have kept that motif going right to the end, but obviously that is just ones man's opinion. And besides, that creepy guy has a great face lol. Is there anyway we could see the original cut?
 
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