The first page to a short script ive been working on. Would like to know if it would hook you to reading more?
INT. Graces living room
GRACE is on her knees next to a table, crying into her hands, the room around her has been trashed and on the table lay a kitchen knife, a pot of pills and a razor blade
Grace places her hand on the table and slides between each item until finally picking up the razor blade
She rubs her finger across the blade gently, giving her a small cut that starts to bleed, she drops the razor to the floor
BRUNETTE GIRL is sat in a chair behind Grace, she claps her hands sarcastically
Brunette Girl
Well that was clever!
The Brunette girl pulls out a cigarette and puts it in her mouth
Grace starts wrapping up her bleeding finger
BRUNETTE GIRL
Aren't you supposed to start with the wrists first?
The Brunette girl pulls out a box of matches and lights her cigarette
Grace finishes wrapping her finger
BRUNETTE GIRL
Are you even listening to me?
Grace picks up the razor and places it back on the table
BRUNETTE GIRL
(laughing)
You know, I'm only here because you need me
The Brunette girl stands up
BRUNETTE GIRL
(sternly)
Your pathetic, stop pretending I'm not here!
Grace turns to look at the Brunette girl then looks the opposite direction
grace
(distantly)
Your not here though are you? Your not even real...
INT. Graces living room
GRACE is on her knees next to a table, crying into her hands, the room around her has been trashed and on the table lay a kitchen knife, a pot of pills and a razor blade
Grace places her hand on the table and slides between each item until finally picking up the razor blade
She rubs her finger across the blade gently, giving her a small cut that starts to bleed, she drops the razor to the floor
BRUNETTE GIRL is sat in a chair behind Grace, she claps her hands sarcastically
Brunette Girl
Well that was clever!
The Brunette girl pulls out a cigarette and puts it in her mouth
Grace starts wrapping up her bleeding finger
BRUNETTE GIRL
Aren't you supposed to start with the wrists first?
The Brunette girl pulls out a box of matches and lights her cigarette
Grace finishes wrapping her finger
BRUNETTE GIRL
Are you even listening to me?
Grace picks up the razor and places it back on the table
BRUNETTE GIRL
(laughing)
You know, I'm only here because you need me
The Brunette girl stands up
BRUNETTE GIRL
(sternly)
Your pathetic, stop pretending I'm not here!
Grace turns to look at the Brunette girl then looks the opposite direction
grace
(distantly)
Your not here though are you? Your not even real...
