I think this is far too harsh an attempted distinction. You seem intent on disregarding screenwriting, story, structure, dialogue etc as purely handwavey abstract artistic choices, when actually there are valid, useful technical objective criticisms you can make of story, structure, dialogue etc.
You can. Sure you can, make technical objective criticisms of story, dialog etc. It's meaningful criticism to some, who follow story structures, and arcs, and dialog structure. It's meaningless to some others, like myself, who are unaware of story structure, dialog structure, and certain other artistic choices. Not to say that it's "handwavey," or to belittle it in any way, it's just that people like me have simply not been schooled in those things. Also, I don't care about dialog structure and story structure and arc. I've talked to people all my life. I've interacted with people all my life. I've never interacted with aliens or ghosts or murderers, but I'll make up dialog structure for them, in the cases I write about them. Maybe I'll try to make it look like stuff I've seen on TV. Or maybe I'll make it up.
If you want artistic criticism, because you will actually follow that advice, because you think that you'll structure your next project accordingly, fine. There's nothing wrong with that. What I'm saying is that I'm not looking for that advice, as that advice will not help me, as I will not heed that advice. It's just different approaches. Artistic criticism is useless to someone like me, who wasn't schooled in it, and on the occasions that he was, didn't appreciate, agree with, or care for it. It's just a different approach.
For the hero's journey, we need kryptonite for superman. I get it. I read that story. I've read it a thousand times. I'm not interested in that story. I don't care for the hero's journey. So while I could use criticism of my story structure in general, or dialog authenticity in general, I don't want criticism of my story and dialog structures as it relates to other stories. My story is different. Maybe it's not for the mass market. The mass market likes Superman, and if you're trying to sell your story to Hollywood, you should write Superman. But the mass market won't like my story. And that's fine. I'm not writing my story so it can follow some structure. I'm writing my story because I like it. If it happens to coincide with some existing structure, great, If it doesn't, so what?
Not picking a fight Maz, just giving you my opinion, and approach to the work by some
It's a way to go, I guess.
It's one way
Cheers,
Aveek
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