archived-videos Dangers of Paper Airplanes

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wilbur

I'm new here, so go easy on me please. Myself and a friend made this when we were bored one day and I want to see what you guys think of it.

Please tell em what you think I should do to improve my work. Thanks!

To watch the vid go here: http://media.putfile.com/paperairplane/320

EDIT: new link added. sorry for the broken one.
 
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Pretty funny. Not bad for something you just whipped up when you were bored. The hand work in the beginning looked really good, but a little to quick in some spots. The whole thing fit great with the music. Despite the title, I had no idea it was going to be a comedy until I saw that wide open mouth. From that point on the camera work didn't seem the same, but I liked how you followed the plane, the whole falling to the knees thing too. I got a laugh out of it, definately.
 
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