hi everyone, I think I'm at a point now where in ready to put together a crowd funding pitch for my animated movie, Neb Wars: Attack of the Gingers. Looking for £50,000. I'm looking for opinions, critique and any suggestions that might help before I start filming & putting together the pitch. Ok, here's what I have so far: -
Opening Video:
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=uBgMe3PQAk0&feature=plcp
Cut to:
Myself, introducing the movie and asking for help
Cut to:
A brief montage video or images depicting the evolution of mankind and the rise of the evil neb empire
Cut to:
Back to me as I describe the movie more introduce a few cast members & animators while cutting in storyboard images and promo scenes from the movie.
Break down what the money will be spent on.
Cut to:
A video of the rewards
cut to:
A final message from myself asking for help
Cut to closing video:
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=LCOypPIuUgE&feature=plcp
An alternative to this would be after the intro has played, cut to a fake news broadcast saying earth had made contact with an alien race, this scrambles to static before I appear dressed as a neb and asking humans to support the cause for ginger domination on planet earth ( very command & conquer-esq)
The Rewards look a little bit like this: -
£1 - A thank you e-card from commander Dicey
£5 - a digital copy of the script and a thank you on credits
£10 - A signed print & digital copy of the movie
£25- A phisical copy of the movie (DVD)
£35 - a collection of 4 beer coasters
£50 - A print of yourself drawn either as a neb or human.
£100 - a 3,5" character model from the movie
£200 - yourself immortalised as a 3.5" character
£350 - Collectors box set containing DVD, figure, tshirts, coasters & keychain
£500 - yourself to appear as a cameo in the movie
£1000 - All the above plus Official Neb Wars retro game for NES
£2000 - All above plus producer credit.
Well that's what I'm working off so far, any feedback, advice & opinions are welcome
Thanks
Stu
Opening Video:
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=uBgMe3PQAk0&feature=plcp
Cut to:
Myself, introducing the movie and asking for help
Cut to:
A brief montage video or images depicting the evolution of mankind and the rise of the evil neb empire
Cut to:
Back to me as I describe the movie more introduce a few cast members & animators while cutting in storyboard images and promo scenes from the movie.
Break down what the money will be spent on.
Cut to:
A video of the rewards
cut to:
A final message from myself asking for help
Cut to closing video:
http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=LCOypPIuUgE&feature=plcp
An alternative to this would be after the intro has played, cut to a fake news broadcast saying earth had made contact with an alien race, this scrambles to static before I appear dressed as a neb and asking humans to support the cause for ginger domination on planet earth ( very command & conquer-esq)
The Rewards look a little bit like this: -
£1 - A thank you e-card from commander Dicey
£5 - a digital copy of the script and a thank you on credits
£10 - A signed print & digital copy of the movie
£25- A phisical copy of the movie (DVD)
£35 - a collection of 4 beer coasters
£50 - A print of yourself drawn either as a neb or human.
£100 - a 3,5" character model from the movie
£200 - yourself immortalised as a 3.5" character
£350 - Collectors box set containing DVD, figure, tshirts, coasters & keychain
£500 - yourself to appear as a cameo in the movie
£1000 - All the above plus Official Neb Wars retro game for NES
£2000 - All above plus producer credit.
Well that's what I'm working off so far, any feedback, advice & opinions are welcome
Thanks
Stu